>Fawn for one shot Wednesday

> Fawn

I saw spots before my eyes.
They sprinted past.
They rode the fawn across the road.
Like snowflakes on the wind
They blew across the gravel.
The long spindle legs bore
the fear of my presence.
We almost intersected and
the white dots made me
feel young again.

9 thoughts on “>Fawn for one shot Wednesday

  1. >the white dots made you feel young again…how original…liked this one..we used to see them in the "garden" of my grandmother, i just loved watching them

  2. >Wonderfully written! I enjoyed this and it brought the images clearly in my mind…ahhhh now if I can enjoy the spots of youth =) Great OneShot! ~April

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