>Heal
I see another’s feelings.
To put words to their pain
gives them a voice and
a place to set their tears.
It would be a place
between our loves.
A place to look until
the mist of our eyes lifts
and we can see each other.
>Heal
I see another’s feelings.
To put words to their pain
gives them a voice and
a place to set their tears.
It would be a place
between our loves.
A place to look until
the mist of our eyes lifts
and we can see each other.
>Beautiful.. I loved the last two lines… as the mist of our eyes lifts…Its lovely.ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
>I second Shashi… beautiful poem with a wonderful ending. Nice One Shot!
>yes – sometimes there is a mist that has to lift first before we can see each other..beautifully expressed
>A place to look until the mist of our eyes lifts… and we can see each other. I loved this post. Beautiful!