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Step down
on your way
look around
make a stay
power loss
come here
try a toss
sincere
you are
I am
far
gone
to play
a ring
a kiss
an
over nite
gray grey grae
I will step up
for you
on my way
I can pray
you and me
become us and we.
Gerald the Writer 
>Jerry…I really liked the style of your contribution.Excellent 55, and very Romantic!I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
>becoming we and us….that is a very good prize at the bottom of the cereal box…love your early rhyme scheme…some good off beats.
>Woke up in the night and thought of a change up for the end of this 55. (Brian)G-Man…are you from Michigan originally? KAWE
>I like the evolution in this poem. A really neat 55!
>Lovely!
>..become us and we..nice one!
>I liked the "gray grey grae" triad and the ending:"I can prayyou and me become us and we"Nice 55!
>I think this is my first time here to your blog. Very nice 55. I too love the "you and me become us and we". Beautiful.Mine is up.PG
>uplifting and fun 55.cool reading!