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I moved a dirt clod
with my big toe
down a line of
cratered cement
the pieces
rolled
and fell into place
and place came around
I picked an acorn
with no hat
bald and no
facial expression
a blank stare
put in my pocket
a saw a two bird
V
geese gossiping
mad enough
to leaVe form
and colon ize
I caught one
leaf sliding down
a draft
a crispy curled
loner free fall
onto my life line
the big dipper
emptied a
ladle of frost
all over everything
crystal cool silver
plated night
>The Seasons of Fall
>title: this morning, eye
>Beautiful imagery, Jerry – especially the dipper full of frost. And the hatless acorn – lovely!Suggestion for a title – "Lone"
>Love the 'bald' acorn; they always look a bit odd without their lids.Nice Autumnal One Shot, Jerry!
>Good fall imagery. 🙂
>Nice imagery, autumn can be so descriptive.
>Dear JerryVery nicely done.. I enjoyed your words.. "I caught oneleaf sliding downa draft"Perfect image…ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com