Sea, what you say,
come with me,
let’s go play again.
I’m under your tow,
come on please
let me go again.
Oh, tip up your tide
let’s take a quick ride again.
Break on my turf,
take me out,
let me surf again.
Sea what you wave,
curl ‘round me
tube like a cave again.
>kowabunga dude…again. smiles. a little more than surfing in thsi 55?
>terrific rhythm that lends nicely. surf's up!
>You had me right up to shave. Then suddenly my mind went to commercial.
>I see a barrel surf! Fun rhythmic 55.
>Found my self floating and bobbing up and down with the lyrical rhythm.of this verse.nice 55er,joanny
>I love the powerful format and the simplicity of the words.
>Made me wish for the summer and I love the winter! Nice write.Spiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.
>I loved the use of "again" – it just put me right at the sea. Lovely!
>(I hear Teletubbies chanting: "Again! Again!")Nice 'flow' to this 55, Jerry.
>unfortunately i can't surf the sea – only the internet…
>Surf's up! I heard the Beach boys singing in the background. Nice one.
>I've never surfed, but love the ocean. In fact, I will be spending my thanksgiving at the beach! Hang 10 or should i say 55!!
>great rhythm with the surf – makes me want to get the board out nice 55Happy Weekend – stay dry
>You make surfing sound like a sensuous experience 🙂
>Hey this almost sounds like song lyrics, roll me rock me all night long, etc. fun 55. I think if you'll take advice, change your blog information section to read "gardening" instead of "yardwork" Hahaha.have a good weekend.my 55 is up for all my poet friends, HEREDianne