the backlit hills revealed
a woman lying on her side
where gentle rises and descents
were laid beneath the sun
a sphere rests midriff
rolls in the lowland
burnt orange expanse
before it collapsed
into her side
sun and soul
>Lovely way to describe a sunset…"before it collasped into her side" great image….bkm
>Great wordplay weaved through the descriptions. Wonderful alliterative ending fading into the shhh. Enjoyed!
>oh, such sweetness!
>This is just gorgeous, Jerry. I'm swooning just a wee bit :). Thanks for the link up also!
>Somebody's been watching sunsets again! (LOL!)Nice One Shot, Jerry!
>This is beautiful. It reminds me of the scene in the film version of "The English Patient" where Katharine Clifton is lying on her side and her profile looks like the mountain shaped like a woman's back.
>Very sensual discription. I loved the image you left in my head. I often compare Snowdon to a Lady, and the mountain ranges of my home look like a sleeping giantess. Well done x
>what a beautiful sunset description – far away from cliche ..very, very nice
>Brother….You make me proud to be from Michigan!
>time for the hill woman to sleep.
>Now THAT is one cool and poetic sunset description! Very nice indeedxo
>Good imagery, flow. Love the word "tinselation".
>Love the undertones surrounded by the golden glowvery nice One Shot