>Silent Sight….For One Shoot Sunday Posted on December 5, 2010 by Jerry >eyelashes brush the incenseand stir into spacesbetweensensessightsilent as nightand blur into facesskin brushes the intent Share this:TwitterEmailFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
>Your style on this one lends to it a breathless quality from the one and two-word lines that work so well with the imagery. Reply ↓
>beautiful imagery here — your use of language is wonderful"incense" & "senses" "stir into spaces" & "blur into faces" — quite clever! love it! Reply ↓
>And a fine light touch brushing out the ink-drawing of this poem. Sensual and intellectual imagery both, the best kind. Reply ↓
>Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html Reply ↓
>i like the touch of itthe feel of eyelashessuch a soft touch yet noticedand the way the words sound and flowwell done Reply ↓
>Love the imagery and expression in your words.Anita.
>Your style on this one lends to it a breathless quality from the one and two-word lines that work so well with the imagery.
>this was beautiul – senses sight silent as night – wow – peacefully sensual
>beautiful imagery here — your use of language is wonderful"incense" & "senses" "stir into spaces" & "blur into faces" — quite clever! love it!
>Beautiful…
>And a fine light touch brushing out the ink-drawing of this poem. Sensual and intellectual imagery both, the best kind.
>you do deftly brush the inky depths of this photo with your words.nice one!LouiseG
>Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html
>Your imagery brushes lightly across the senses, feeling the depths of the photo. Well done.
>Short but so beautifully written. Great write for the promptWysteria
>Skin brushes the intent. Beautifully penned…now I really do need a fan…
>Mesmerizing!Powerful imagery,deep and touchy!WOW..:)
>A sibilant effort indeed. The repeated sounds make it a little hypnotic.
>"…skin brushes the intent." That is a great line, Jerry. Good poem.
>i like the touch of itthe feel of eyelashessuch a soft touch yet noticedand the way the words sound and flowwell done
>held with touch of beauty ,that floats within