I dream of reality,
of when I am
Not moving my
eyes in front of you,
but heavy lids
by your story.
Your joy and pain
My reality becomes
a dream with you of
>lovely! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
>I love how dreams and reality blended, Jerry…the last lines are like a testament to true love.My potluck: so maybe
>what a cute surprise…Thanks for sharing your talent with JP..A+
>You've caught that connection between story teller and listener for me.
>Blending moments, be they dreams or reveries… fun surprises still await.
>wise words, well put.keep it up.:)
>i think i am always in the dreamland….that joy and pain moment then reality…and isnt it so sweet to have that dream gives us a lot of possibility to hope and go on?
>you truly impressed me ..sleepy rain …love the imagery here.masterful poetry, elegant sentiments…keep the brilliance coming… Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!