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Don’t take that poetic tone with me!
Put that metaphor down and back away slowly.
A little less alliteration, leave letters lie.
About those similes, they are like, like, like…identical twins.
Don’t talk to me in meters and rhyme,
I’m not in the mood, out of time.
Give it straight,
because I have a headache.
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>No indecision there! very clear-'leave the letters lie' is great, thanks!
>One of the most clever 55's I've ever read!Nice job, Jerry!
>haha this is briliant…i can see being held up with a metaphor…lol
>jerry…i LOVE your 55 – you rock the place – ha!
>this is fantastic loved it..truly unique- SY
>LOVE this! Very clever!
>It does get old some days, doesn't it?
>You sound like an angry college professor!!But it was Most Excellent!!Loved your 55 My Friend.Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End….G
>Gorgeous! A little less alliteration! ha!
>Oh clever – that was fun.
>How very bright and witty…(aka clever) Enjoyed it immensely.