Both touch the lips.
Both retain water.
Lynn is vile?
Both can squawk.
Both are a stretch.
Both are loosely royal.
Both are taking bows.
just a poet
Both are needful.
>Someone was in a playful mood – and this playfulness with words is wonderful.
>Entertaining look at life – pointing out the similarities and the dualities in so many (and not so obvious) aspects of life…fun little exercise.
>did you just use tube steak and phone sex in the same poem…(spits coffee all over his computer)…you rock!
>Very well written Jerry.You do Michigan proud!
>words swordor soared words*still pondering 4 out of 9 or's*Peace, hp
>You presented some interesting narrative comparisons without being judgmental. Which is a feat. You've left the reader there to judge for themselves using their own where with all to decide if your conclusion are proper ones or not. Nice and compactly done Jerry.
>I was trying to think of one and drawing a blank, Jerry. Great wordplay, logic play too. My favorite was Gypsy Queens and Burger Kings—both are loosely royal. Ha! Very witty across the board with these pairing. Great conclusion too.
>This was a lot of fun 🙂 enjoyed it!
>the saxophone and phone sex line cracked me up jerry…lol..great write
>LOVE it! wish i had written it.