covered like a camisole
the day hung on light and loosely
I walked through with you
our hearts decomposing
and composting a path
on which to lay our souls
steps light as aire
lent us bent on humid
baselines from edge to edge
and life lifted and burned
>If I must decompose to compost can't think of a prettier place than the base lines of this path.
>Nice,the image and the poem go well together
>A splendid image of life and rebirth, a perfect mood setter for spring. The image sets a beautiful parallel for the words, which set a lovely imagery of their own. Descriptive, sensory, thoughtful. Lovely work.
>Beautiful imagery in this, a delicate and wispy feel, it shifts with just a breath from line to line of change and acceptance and renewal. Excellent stuff.
>"..Our hearts decomposing and composting a path…" Flat-out lovely, Jerry.
>All in a day… beautifully said.
>hidden seeds come forth for tomorrow will not waita pleasant notion herePeace, hp
>You really did justice to the picture, with a nice poem Jerry
>dude the decompose to compost lines are hot…nice write…
>You're such a romantic dude, Jerry!Nice One Shot!
>Absolutely beautiful Jerry, both word and image…a walk within time, place and soul…a relationship that has blended towards a forever …bkm
>a path on which to lay our souls…love this and beautiful photo as well – goes perfectly with the mood of your words jerry
>LOVE both the photo and poem. Decompose our hearts — so so wonderful.