8 thoughts on “Edges

  1. i used to paint watercolors – not very good though…but i just love how they flow and the effects you can create..the edges of a day..beautiful jerry…sometimes the moments are just that perfect that the details are not so important…i understand the feeling you capture here

  2. Oh, I like this, Jerry. I had a day exactly like this yesterday. And I’m working on a poem about a pianting I saw yesterday that captured what happened. But I think I like yours better.

  3. The first two stanzas are excellent, an ethereal feeling of being disconnected from the world emotionally, whilst feeling it physically. The third stanza is a dip for me, a bit ‘off’, if that’s the right word, within the context of the poem. i think you could have done without it.

    • Thanks for keeping It real…there Is a point i always find Where ethereal transcends into the real…where i am in The Here And now. Thanks for Your thoughts

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