By the river,
Eyes dip their
bare on breeze.
and bent yellow
on the surface.
Nice poem with great visuals.
Lovely brushing of the words ~ So serene as the picture ~
Some day next summer I will be feeling very, very hot, and will be longing for fall to come soon. I will read this poem and…. I will be totally refreshed. I’m sure of it!
oh i like much jerry…autumn – and not only what it is but how it feels – in each and every line..
got some color to the picture/words