>Shhhhh….For Talon Posted on October 27, 2010 by Jerry > I have less to say,But more desire to say it.I’ll walk on discarding words.They tumble like rocks in a brain tumbler.Polish, buff, caressa few gems.In the beginning was a word. Share this:TwitterEmailFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
>I really like this one. And its brevity nicely reveals its meaning too.
>lol! This was brilliant, Jerry! I love the idea of the tumbling words being polished. Just wonderful writing!
>this is lovely – is this for "our" Talon..? did you tell her..i'm sure she will love it..
>That explains that grinding sound in my head – LOL! Nice one, Jerry!
>This is lovely. Its impact is enhanced by its length.
>smart you,fabulous piece for Talon.
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